Constructive criticism appreciated

[CPU Inc]

Looking for help on my first web page!:rolleyes:

[tmmoose]

So Where Is The Link??

[animgirl]

Here is the link (http://www.cpuinc.us)

Well it is very clean! And you have your advertisements at the bottom, that's a plus!

Is this a one page site?
You need like... a logo or something, 'cause the dead truth is, when I see this site, nothing catches my eye and I don't even think about reading what it's about.

A logo, pictures, something. :)

[tmmoose]

I Agree With Animgirl You Need Something To Get The Viewers Attention....I Wonder If AnimgirlIs Making You An Offer?

[drak]

Is yellow paper'ish like. Could use some pizazz (think thats the way you spell it)

Maybe like ummmm write it down on paper and scan it you could map the links n'stuff. Would be something cool and interesting.

You could ask a 3d artist to may you some graphics that rawk =).

or you can leave it be simple is good but your pages define simple pretty ideal =p

Good luck keep up the good work...