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DanThMan
04-20-2003, 12:07 PM
Please review the english part of this site!
Regarding anything. The english site isnīt that crucial
because itīs just about a small kennel in Sweden.
But itīs nice to know if anything sounds or looks stupid.
I did it in a hurry, because thereīs puppies on their way,
and my wife keeps buggin me!
http://www.amazingfriends.cjb.net

BoR|S
04-20-2003, 02:16 PM
The page is very nice, and the dogs are so cute! :p

There are about two things I didn't like about the page:
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It seems a little bit dark...
The menu on each page, I think you should extend the top frame and put the menu there. There is no need to reload it all the time and that will save bandwidth + when you load the guestbook, there is no menu...
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BTW, I didn't check if the page meets W3C standarts.

DanThMan
04-21-2003, 12:34 AM
Thank you Boris for your review!
I really appreciate your input.
Looking at the menuplacement right now!
The colors is my wifeīs doing...canīt change that ;)

animgirl
05-05-2003, 12:04 PM
In the header "Amazing Friend's" it should actually be "Amazing Friends".

animgirl

DanThMan
05-05-2003, 01:40 PM
Thanks for your opinion animgirl.
In this case they have "rules" you know ;)
We had to decide between...
Kennel Amazing Friends or
Amazing Friendīs Kennel
I donīt really know if itīs correct but those were our choices.

dabbler
05-05-2003, 02:00 PM
I must agree with Animgirl.

In the header Amazing Friends is correct, unless you specify the kennel.

Is it the kennel of an "amazing friend" or of "amazing friends"?

If singular then "friend's"; but if plural, then " friends' " is correct. If it is not showing possession, then the dogs are amazing Friends!

English can be so confusing at times.

tmmoose
05-05-2003, 02:21 PM
In About Us.... We began to miss the life that it means of being with a dog! should be....We began to miss life with a dog and all that that means! Or Something similar..

In Kennel News You Have...Daisy is already becoming to act... Should be...Daisy is already beginning to act.......Not An Opinion ???... A Correction

DanThMan
05-05-2003, 02:32 PM
Thanks for your lesson in english dabbler!
We wanted it to be Amazing Friends but the Swedish
Kennel Club wouldnīt have it that way.
I hope you liked the dogs. They are truly Amazing Friend :D s

By the way..My wife would love to see your greetings in our
guestbook :)

and tmmoose...thanks for your opinion!

DanThMan
05-15-2003, 11:11 AM
tmmoose...
I didnīt mean to be rude. Of course itīs a correction and now
itīs corrected!
and Boris... I have changed the menu and I have also changed the background...
Can some of you tell me if the effect on the left moves smoothly
or not.
In this case I would also appreciate your system info (cpu,browser,memory and your bandwith) .
Because Iīm not sure if the "common" user are prepared for
visuals like this.
Logic tells me this is computer related but I would like to read
your opinion;)